Saturday, March 15, 2014

Can'T Help It Comments

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Every time when you pass by,
I still remember the days
The days of happiness
The sweet pleasant memories fills my heart
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Hans Vr 18 December 2015

Beautiful, the mixed feelings of hatred and love very poetically expressed. We do not have control over all these feelings. If we manage to pity someone with a twisted personality as much as we pity somebody with a twisted back, it may help to control a bit better both love and hatred for them.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 01 November 2014

Hello poet friend Piumi. I enjoyed this passionate piece, well done. Loyd PS: Please check out my new book on Amazon or Barnes and Noble, Pumpkinny Tales. Thanks for your support.

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Hira Akhtar 18 March 2014

Yeah thats right, if we have intense love for some one we can't help ourselves to frget him/her... Nice expression of your feelings :) keep writing

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