Saturday, September 19, 2020

Can't Get You Out Of My Mind Comments

Rating: 4.5

My life has become a mess without you
And nothing's gonna change it, no matter what I do
I think I really messed up somewhere
Because now you really don't seem to care
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Alexie Whitman
COMMENTS

Loved this gem of a poem. Congratulations

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Cindy Kagori 15 January 2021

A lot of improvement on this one. I love it

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Quoth Theraven 07 October 2020

Alexie, I can feel the confusion and longing in this poem. Makes the reader wonder at what happened. QtR

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Chan Mongol 05 October 2020

Broken heart! Well written. I enjoyed.

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Arb Rudi 02 October 2020

I love it. Breakups sometimes can be tough and leave you devastated. Feeling like everything is falling apart has got to be the worst feeling ever. Extremely straightforward. Continue writing!

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Chinedu Dike 21 September 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings.... very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 September 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Alexie W. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Suryendu Chaudhury 19 September 2020

Effective. Straightforward.

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