My life has become a mess without you
And nothing's gonna change it, no matter what I do
I think I really messed up somewhere
Because now you really don't seem to care
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Alexie, I can feel the confusion and longing in this poem. Makes the reader wonder at what happened. QtR
I love it. Breakups sometimes can be tough and leave you devastated. Feeling like everything is falling apart has got to be the worst feeling ever. Extremely straightforward. Continue writing!
Well expressed thoughts and feelings.... very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
Write comment. Such a nice poem, Alexie W. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
Loved this gem of a poem. Congratulations