Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Can'T Forgive You For Your Crime Comments

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You were always the one to shake away my fears
You were always there to wipe away my tears
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Samantha Bailey
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Kay Staley 21 August 2014

Blah blah poem. There are no real emotions or drastical sounding languages in this. If its for you and only you, then keep writing but dont post online. If its for other people, them make them feel the way that you were feeling. Dont let them get bored and quit reading like I had to do with this one.

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So I can't forgive you for your crime The punishment won't end this time 'Cause now we're done, it's finally over And this hurt will fade in time .. it is shocking and bad treatment and causing so much anguish.. beaaaaaaaaaaaaautiful write poet.. keep it up...10 read mine cowardice act.. mary to marry and miss i miss u

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