Can'T Escape Comments

Lovely tribute to the lady of your dreams- you make me feel Alive inside your garden eyes- - > that is a gorgeous descriptive

Just stumbled upon this poem with a related poems link from another poem, and it is great! Fabulous work. Write more.

In your eyes I want to stay In your heart I want to grow ................................................ Nothing's ever felt so real Can't escape, won't even try ................................................. You have seized a divine spark from a corner of your eye and have lighted an eternal fire of love, too lovely rhyme, simply wonderfully, Brian. Tsira

Encompassed by love, never wanting to leave. Delightful poem: D

Those words 'garden eyes' captivate me! This has the sound of an Elizabethan love song - delightful. Linda

I like this line a lot even though it provokes that garden of Eden with its sense of innocence - and a beginning just as this poem is: Alive inside your garden eyes.

Brian, this surely must touch a responsive cord with anyone who has ever been in love. A wonderful poem. A ten for this fine piece.

no we cant escape from the reality of falling in love...i often wonder why we dont rise in love? surely that would be better...

That Jack Russell's a funny guy! ! This is a terrifically well written poem Brian. It's excellent from end to end. Tells the story of falling in love as quickly as it happens and transmits all the emotion of the process and what it means to you straight into the reader's mind and heart. jim

I love this one. It's actually quite a reminder of my life. PERFECT!

Beautiful poem, Brian...trips along nicely without missing a (heart) beat. Full credit to you :) jack. (is the 'p' problem the one symtomatic of PH, or is 'gripped' a mis-spelling?)

Romantic and beautiful Brian, I see why it made the Top 500. Keep writing my friend, you are a wonderful poet.---Melvina---

This is one of my favorites... Hey Brian, ESCAPE from wherever you are... I miss your poems...k

You love poems are wonderful. I love them.

i'm hooked by 'garden eyes'...makes me wonder about what was seen from 'the corner of my eye'...hypnotic love very close to obsession though. mesmerizing work, Brian. -Tailor

Brian, I don't know how I've missed this one, a very affecting and truly relatable poem. Wonderful imagery indeed. I can't choose a favorite stanza; every bit of this is special. Esther : ]

this is soo romantic... the last two stanzas can make gals fall in love wid u! ! ... ;) effective write! !

Brian, you have described being in love beautifully.... Enjoyed reading it! Sujata

Beautiful poem. Love does have its ups and downs which is the true beauty of love. Thanks for this poem, i can relate very well to it! Very nicely written.

Your poem is very beautiful brian.I truly loved it. Take care. Excellent imagery and emotional.