Monday, April 4, 2005

Can'T Breathe Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can’t breathe
Something’s in my throat
Darkness closing ‘round me...
Losing feeling in my limbs
...
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Jayme Nicole
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Mary Nagy 09 September 2005

Same here! This is so intense that the reader does seem to 'be there' with you. Nice job. Sincerely, Mary

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Casey Rock 14 July 2005

I enjoyed it-found myself holding my breath!

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