Monday, June 23, 2008

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Rating: 4.3

I'm standing here in front of him
with red apple cheeks and with
stars in my eyes, his kiss like haven,
lips like clouds in the sky,
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Melissa Schreuder
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I like the beauty in your words. How more meaningful this poem is I think to people who can understand what true love is. Nice poem.

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Alan Curtis 11 May 2009

Short but sweet...I can dig it! ! Just go with the flow home grl, ur style is far from adverse. Peace and love! Hippy Sav

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Shilesha Johnson 26 June 2008

i know exactly how you feel. my boyfriend makes me feel the same way. nice poem

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Melissa Schreuder

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