Thursday, March 6, 2014

Can'T Believe Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can’t believe that you are gone
For you are all around
You’re here in everything I see
In every passing sound
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Valerie Dohren
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Yash Shinde 04 April 2014

....a beautiful romantic piece...........beautiful words and imagery gives life to this poem..........

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Amitava Sur 20 March 2014

Such a lovely description of the sweet memories keeping the beloved well within the heart. So endearing to read the lines..... You’ll always be within my world And here within my space .............................................. .............................................. I’ll never let you go You’ll always be right here with me......... Beautiful. You may read my poem LIVE IN YOU

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John Brown 18 March 2014

Beautiful, as ever, and well written.

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Neela Nath Das 09 March 2014

Val, we believe that body perishes but soul exists.So, he is always with you.Beautiful verse!

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Dee Corpolongo 08 March 2014

oh Val, this is so beautiful and has brought tears to my eyes. I know the pain in losing loved ones, more than I care to think about, but losing someone who has been so much apart of your life, your soul mate, is devastating. You are such a great and much loved woman. I send you {{{hugs}}} with lots of love......always. Thank you for this beautiful poem.

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Edwina Reizer 08 March 2014

Valerie, I love this poem. The words are so endearin and the rhyme scheme is great. Edwina Reizer

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Kanav Justa 08 March 2014

, , , your poems are truly amazing, , , this one made me sad, , : (

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Susan Lacovara 07 March 2014

Perfectly penned and found at just the right moment....you words, to help to ease the heaviness of a heart. Like looking the through th stained glass o your soul...I will keep this poem to my list if favorites...the sentimental sweetness I am so glad you shared. PEACE

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Dave Walker 07 March 2014

Sometimes when we lose someone it just feels like they was taken too soon, all our moments makes it feel like they are still here with us, their soul could very well be still here watching over us. A very moving poem, a fantastic write.

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Mervyn Graham 07 March 2014

I think I know how you feel... when my father past often times I could feel him right by my side or hear him perhaps in the next room. So much so I started to chat to him. Thank you for posting this... it's wonderful.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 March 2014

In the breath of rain, in the fragrance of flowers, in nature's beauty he is everywhere. Nice feelings.

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Lyn Paul 06 March 2014

Truly Beautiful words for you late husband Valerie. How proud he would be. Having been a Funeral Director I see these words too be spoken at many celebrations for those lost. Very moving

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Thomas Carolan 06 March 2014

that is a lovely poem well penned and from all of the heart well done thomas

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