Monday, September 25, 2006
Can'T Beat Much Longer Without You Comments
Rating: ★3.5
I'm feeling drowsy and i can't speak
My life is lousy and my heart is weak
I need to get away from this crazy street
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Original Unknown Girl
25 September 2006
Hi Lucy, in it's simplicity this is beautiful. I think you could make this into a song. You don't need to say anything more I can sense what you're saying here.... it sings out from the page. Great write - Humber Girl: -)
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7/29/2025 7:03:45 PM # 1.0.0
Hi Lucy, in it's simplicity this is beautiful. I think you could make this into a song. You don't need to say anything more I can sense what you're saying here.... it sings out from the page. Great write - Humber Girl: -)