Can'T Bear Comments

ver nice work! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

this poem touches on some deep issues.the words flow smoothly. i liked it

This is a good poem & you touched on some key issues in society today. Keep up the good work although at first I didn't know where you was going with it but at the end of the poem I was riding right along with you.

You have a poetic instinct. Good poem/deep indeed. Keep on writing.

Magnify the fear of... Vapourising ocean, Seedless trees, Needless land, Sterile being, Can't bear, can't bear at all.

Truely said..... this is were we are living..