Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Can'T Comments

Rating: 5.0

A little word, a bit defeatist,
A gate keeper to progress
Or fun, crusher of dreams,
Negativity personified.
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Danny Draper
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Lyn Paul 11 November 2013

What great thought in these words Danny, very clever. Well done

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Ruth Walters 02 October 2012

That's a lot of words to describe the little word, 'can't'. As a child I would use 'can't' to replace 'don't want to'. 'Don't want to' sounded disobedient, but 'can't sounded more as though there was something stopping my outside of myself.....'can't do that, dad won't let me' type of thing. Good poem

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Karen Sinclair 16 June 2012

Fantastic piece of imagination and common sense combined (i particularily loved the bracketed scenes) lol made me smile as i know its serious but that covered the reasons why there is so much we are restricted by...thanks for sharing a piece of meaning... karen

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Sally Plumb Plumb 13 June 2012

You must have a continually flowing thought process.Great write.

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Valerie Dohren 03 June 2012

Much wisdom here, but we do all have our limitations and there are times when we genuinely can't.

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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