Tuesday, December 15, 2009

Can It Be? Comments

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Can the tears extinguish the flames of my heart?
Can the screams explode the volcano of my anger?
Can you feel what I exactly feel inside?
Can you make me calm down?
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Almedia Knight-Oliver 20 December 2009

Hi Earam, I love your poem...the narrator must understand that only the character in the poem can do something. A goosd write, and I give this poem a 10

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The Lost.. 17 December 2009

but if someone does love you..he\she will do every thing for you..and will also answer your questions :) hope you'll find that one...keep writing and let poetry answer your questions :)

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