Sunday, November 6, 2011

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</>Years are gone, and tears I've cried
Several times my love denied
No peace they had, no love for me
But now so clear, wasn't meant to be.
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Jack Price 14 November 2011

What a nice poem. Its an old fashioned kind of love poem very easy to understand and built to a climate with the ending lines: Forever I will love you, Forever I'll stand For you have always held my heart there in your hands good work! ! ! J. L. Price

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Romeo Della Valle 06 November 2011

Another heart touching write that almost made me cry for I can identify with it 10+++ I have been there some time ago and I still think about her sometimes and I wonder why! It is hared to overcome this situation when you have loved someone so much and that person meant so much to you! It is not that easy to forget and bury the Past but with time, it can been done! Just take a day at the time, nobody knows one day your prince charming may arrive! ...Your poetic talent is so obvious in this great poem! Keep It Up! God Bless You for always! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC...

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