Friday, September 22, 2017

Can I, Yes I Can Comments

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Can I, Yes I Can

Can I look at a man
And see the boy within,
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Josephine Dunn
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2017

Seeing lines of worries all the time provokes thought. For seeing future we all become crazy. Love needs hope and hope brings love. Amazing poem is shared.10

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Josephine Dunn 23 October 2017

Thanks; -D

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 September 2017

Can I look past The lines of worry, See all the times That made him sorry Thanks dear Josephine for sharing such a poem of high taste, rich in poetic skills. 10++++ for it.

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Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken 22 September 2017

Beautiful poem Josephine Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Josephine Dunn 23 October 2017

Thanks: -D

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D Priyanka Singh 22 September 2017

Can I find the truth In this mis-spent youth Un-weave the threads, Release the dread That lies beneath, Yes I can, Yes I can. A very beautiful poem and a trend setter. 10++++

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Josephine Dunn 23 October 2017

Thank you: -D

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