Can I Tempt You? Comments

I must stress, this isn't autobiographical. The aim is to lure you in, then slap you in the face with the ending.

Confused am I, but let me say- Okay by me, if you're that way. This one was a belly cracker-I'm still chuckling as I write

I particularly 'like' the slap bit as it brings one back to his being...please write on...

Just too, too funny, take care of your nightie it sounds a special one! , .such fun you have, so do I reading your poems.

Very good, and very apt these days! !

like it. a great poem. i like your style.