Saturday, October 23, 2010

Can I Take That Chance Again? Comments

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Can I take that chance again…?
To see you slowly slip away.
All I ask is that you look at me.
So much we’ve been through.
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Kevin Carney
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 21 January 2011

your image burned into my mind, you're so strong yet so hard----very beautifully put together. you are a genius. i love this poem of yours.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 04 November 2010

So intense the emotions, how a man can live without taking any challenge of winning or defeating the game! Either win or defeat, two global units in the measuring parameter are there. Otherwise leave all passions of possessing, or stand straight as a beloved to love only, not to be loved at all. Written very well such passion and contradictions by a descriptive way. Thank you.10 regards, pranab

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