Friday, May 29, 2009

Can I See Through Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

May i borrow your faith, for a little while,
I promise you, I'll keep it safe,
Will you walk with me, just one more mile,
Take pity on this homeless waif,
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Laurie hill
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Meggie Gultiano 27 October 2009

Your piece is beautiful and an uplifting one I love these lines of yours below ....................................................... will they too feel the calm that has touched me, when they sit at the feet of our God. ..Laurie, you have drawn me closer and closer to God reading this. What a wonderful write you have here.It is very peaceful to read

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Theresa Moore 14 October 2009

An awesome poem...powerful, sensitive, and uplifting.

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Patti Masterman 05 September 2009

This is one of my favorite styles; so rhythmic, so musical..I always get lost in words such as this. Tremendous writing.

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Smiley Hooker 01 August 2009

This is a beautiful reassuring poem of faith and hope. Thoughts very well expressed and so touching. Thank you for sharing. :)

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Susan Jarvis 05 July 2009

The calm, tranquility and beauty of these words would turn the head of steadfast atheist. Simply stunning! S :)

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Duh Huh 09 June 2009

Wow. I'm speechless Laurie. This poem touched me deeply. I got tears in my eyes my friend, they are from the emotion caused by the beautiful imagery and feelings i got reading your poem. My faith soared with it, gave me tears of joy. Faith is the way you described it my friend, it can lead people to paradise and those that decide to follow. God bless you, he has already touched you with His inspiration. Am keeping this one Laurie :)

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Tsira Goge 09 June 2009

when they sit at the feet of our God. .................................................... Laurie, this is a remarkably, you are the master of words and the thought...10... Best wishes, Tsira

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trulky a beautiful piece. loved the chosen topic.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 06 June 2009

This is truly an astonishing poem, I am drawn deeper and deeper by every line written, so touching Laurie

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T S 01 June 2009

Just Beautiful Laurie A perfect 10 Plus

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Rosalita Fernandez 31 May 2009

beautiful piece, strong but flows so easily. so nicely written.... Rose

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Susan Bagley 31 May 2009

Lovely Laurie, and who has not thought of the day when they may or may not be escorted to the eternal hereafter. A lovely read and reassuring. Susan

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Such a beautiful piece of writing that flowed so well, is as deep as a well too, and shows the faith we have in a wishing well. Your faith shines through this poem.....Karin Anderson

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Sonya Florentino 29 May 2009

i don't know what to say Laurie except that it brought me to tears....that's 10 tears and still flowing....

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Fiona Davidson 29 May 2009

Wonderful write Laurie...such beautiful imagery used here...Fi 10+++

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