Can I Love Again
Can i do it again
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ur emotions heighten the sensations! truly sweet and elegant! amazing!
Your pain was captured within every line, this is a fine write. stay strong my friend, and lets hope you loving soul returns. all the best Jon
Romantically passionate and authentic, well-penned! Another 10.
the inner conflict beautifully done in words.wonderful. cheers shiralley
10 deffo! It's a very heartfelt poem that makes the reader feel what you feel. xxx p.s thank you so, so much for your lovely comment about Tale of the Sea! It is the best poem I've written, so it means alot that you think so too! ! xxx
Hey mate...very well done! ! I felt like that for 4 years...thats untill I fell in love again(by accident off course) I think we all ask ourself that question at least once in a lifetime! !
You've captured the dilemma we all face as a great love ends.10