Monday, January 26, 2009

Can I Have Your Attention Please... Comments

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....Ladies and Gentlemen?
Well, just one gentleman actually.
One particular gentleman,
as it happens.
...
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Sue Stone
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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 June 2012

To be heard, to be understood, to be acknowledged, To be forgiven for irrationality; mine and yours........................................WONDERFUL WRITE YET INGENIOUS. THANKS FOR SHARING

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 June 2012

To be heard, to be understood, to be acknowledged, To be forgiven for irrationality; mine and yours........................................WONDERFUL WRITE YET INGENIOUS. THANKS FOR SHARING

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Martin O'Neill 08 April 2012

Ah, Sue, I can feel this to the bottom of my remote control! I understand the everyday'ness' that creeps into relationships and the huge effort it can be for some to turn it around - like a battleship swinging a quick 90 degrees. Beautifully phrased and structured..

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C. P. Sharma 10 April 2010

A love lorn heart Doesn't want to part, I want to feel that you have heard me; not just what I say - but all that I don't. I want to feel that you connect with me, somewhere in the middle of what I say, and that you hear and understand. * * * To be heard, to be understood, to be acknowledged, To be forgiven for irrationality; mine and yours. that is all that a woman's heart wants and you say it so poetically and passionately. I really loved it.

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Emily Oldham 11 May 2009

wow, this poems amazing! men ought to read this and listen to it! Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Lee Crowell 01 February 2009

uh, what did I miss? you have a way with words that keeps my attention I'll keep rereading until I find the secret message that the others are seeing

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 February 2009

Wow! What a concept! I love it. I figured it out immediately, but I still loved what you and every woman, I suppose, has to say. It was really good. I think your message got through. GW62

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