Sunday, June 21, 2009

Can I Have You? Comments

Rating: ★4.8

Dreams falling like beads from heaven
Scattered like dew carpeting the meadow
Waiting for a new dawn to kiss goodbye
Echoes heard from a lonely mountain
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Maia Padua
lonely soothing hurting fog
COMMENTS
Leslie Philibert 13 February 2015

Some good ideas, but this needs a re-write, lots of strange syntax here....

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Kim Barney 13 February 2015

Beautiful poem marred by very few punctuation and grammar mistakes. Congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the Day!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 February 2015

Nice poem con rates tears spear soul and body, ..,

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Rajesh Natamsha 13 February 2015

Nice poem Maia. I overwhelmed. Thank you!

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