Saturday, April 2, 2011

Can I Give You Up? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I miss you.

I have tried to turn my heart to stone
but it won't let me
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Susan Cook
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Eric Cockrell 23 June 2011

intimate... good heartfelt poem!

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Mozafar Ali 12 May 2011

Really sweet poem and i like the way you metaphorically protrayed your self as a lilly, Im new to this so maybe if u have time u could glance at abit of my work, Monsoon, Yours and Crictic. thank you x

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Ronik Spartan 12 May 2011

a natural misery wonderfully described, hats off!

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Ron S King 20 April 2011

You really do have the heart of a Poetess and, in this, you can never give up on loving because love keeps you strong. A sad but lovely write... Ron.

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Romeo Della Valle 10 April 2011

A very beautiful, well penned and poignant write! My friend, you got great talent and feelings, the very basic to make in the poetry world! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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Saadat Tahir 06 April 2011

beautiful poem u have there so very romantic and by default sad too well done cheers

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Sally Plumb Plumb 06 April 2011

It is a beautiful poem.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 06 April 2011

It is a beautiful poem.

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