Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Can I Forget You? Comments

Rating: 3.0

When I can no longer
depend on my muse
to guide heart and hand.
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Heather Burns
COMMENTS
Ruby Mostazir 23 January 2021

Wonderful poem! Yes love remains forever & always

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 June 2020

I love reading your poem, all your poems, they are still up-to-date and very inspiring. Very pity that we do not communicate through poems anymore. Thank you so much for your loveliest words in my recent MPOTD, dear Heather! Indeed, you breathe and I breathe The Breadth Of Life. Thank YOU, darling poetess.

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Harindhar Reddy 08 April 2020

Oh, it seems impossible to forget such a person. Wow, once again a smooth flow of words without ebbs and tides make this poem CLASICAL. Amazing verse!

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2019

Pen and paper lying beside me, not a word forth coming............../// cause the love cannot forget the past

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Michelle Robertson 26 April 2018

Emotion? Hmmmmmm? Explication, not reiteration. Sounds like a bad Taylor Swift song. Not your best work. Hint: You WOULD forget....because you'd be dead...

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Sranisha Francis 05 June 2016

Pen and paper lying beside me, not a word forth coming. LOVE remains................. good works.

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Asma Khan 22 December 2015

Very simple yet a beautiful portray of an old aged love. Keep writing. Great job`!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 April 2015

you can't as it is our want we breathe same environment we need to be present

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Patricia Grantham 14 October 2014

A very emotional but soothing write. Love summed up in few words. Says a lot.

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Mysia Hayling 03 October 2014

lovely poem, the mood of the poem is soft yet soothing.

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Ken E Hall 19 August 2014

Luvli love poem nothing can compare you are always full of emotion Heather and it's a pleasure to read...regards

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Akhtar Jawad 11 August 2014

Is there anything other than love that exists, if so, the memories of a beloved are immortal. A nice lovely poem.

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Amitava Sur 24 June 2014

Love is like that only, once you're settled with that love, it's a constant possession for you. Whatever happens after that you can't be without that love.... beautiful

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Leloudia Migdali 03 June 2014

A very nice poem full of emotion.

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Megan Miller 18 February 2014

i love your work! very inspiring i really enjoy reading them.

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Tribhawan Kaul 17 December 2012

A very emotional poem from your pen. The poet though is experiencing writer's block, yet the poet will never be able to forget its muse till end. Lovely write.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 December 2012

Fine musin poem i enjoyd readin! Yor works r a joy 4 readers.

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Otteri Selvakumar 05 December 2012

a simply very think full poem

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