Friday, April 26, 2013
Can I Continue Comments
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Can I continue making the same mistakes,
Shall I continue just for your sake.
Will you ever see the damage it does,
Can we ever be what we once was.
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Mal Sharp
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David Wood
01 May 2013
I hope love wins through in the end. I like your style and it rhymes well. A very good write.
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7/20/2025 11:06:01 PM # 1.0.0
A good steady rhythm throughout this eye-opening, honest poem. Amazing insight, poignant, seeing through the illusion of love and letting it go. Gently heart-wrenching. Will add to my list of favorites. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn