Can I...? Comments

Why do you feel the need to ask? Just do it

Of course you can.. it's a freedom land...

Questions every girl in love asks, conscious of them or not. very easy to relate to. nice job

Flow of words comes really well out of your pen... that too in graceful manner.10 +++ Regards Kushal

shows your love towards your boyfriend.......asking his consent before doing anything...... good one

this poem is full of questions..and this poem is full of love..grace

nice poem so many can I's

Lots of lovely questions are there in this nice poem. Following lines/questions concluding that expressing the message of the poem: 'Can I act the way that I feel? Will you be able to handle it? ' Love it 10+

fanastic poem, well done 10

hey toni...write use that frame you use for your camero poem....this is cooll too...but now that poem is tousands times better....hey by the way i wrote how my ex came in a 'charade' and how all things went hey wire...new one come and read it...... see the case is i m some poor wretched fellow...i v to ask money from mom even for my busfare lol...see ya regards shan

Can I call just to tell you I love you? Oh! a lover's eagerness as well as confusion touched me...Luv - Brishti