Can He Really See What I See Comments

*****does he interpret*****

Oh yes..this happens to me...sometimes i wonder if the one i love sees the world as I see it, , Does he interprets things the way I do.. But anyway, ... if he doesn't...then tell him...let him see things the way you do And for sure..happiness felt, when shared, is so priceless I Love Your Poem Madam

I would venture to say if the person is with you absolutely. Enjoyed this work keep smiling and wishing on stars.

Expression of the deep love in such a good poem and it is nice.

Nice write. Economy of words and words working hard.

Nice write...good flow..................blank verse.

I'm glad this was poem of the day Kaila its one of your best!

Great poem Kaila. Love the descriptions and strong emotions conveyed.

a good poem that deserves to be poem of the day. It might be worth using a question mark, Can He Really See What I See? is grammatically a question...

This is a picture of pure phantasmagorical elegance, its accentuated with romantic innocents that it puts me in the mind of where you are. Its seems simplistic but the feelings you posses are complex and intricate, even if your lover does not see the stars, then he should understand your words. Great stuff

Very lovely poem, full of description and feeling. I like the way the poem is composed; it has a natural and continuous flow, making the reader enjoy the depiction of the narration. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing. Warm regards, ~Besa

very nicely expressed!

Poetry as it's supposed to be.

Kaila beautiful... right from the word go...fantastic :)

probably not but he cares

Nature presented well with the passion of sharing beauty with the beloved one. Well.

Really touching poem, deep, thanks

Dear Sister of My Soul.....you have written my heart to the universe...hugs you so tight.....so wonderful to read your works....love you my sister.

You really have presented to the Poetry World a reservoir of beautiful and penning words that clearly manifests your great poetic talent! Great job done here! Thank you for sharing! 10+++ God Bless You for always and keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...