Saturday, October 20, 2007

Can Death Come Calling If You Don'T Have A Telephone? Comments

Rating: 4.3

The sky opens up before your eye
And the rain comes pouring from the sky.
There's an old tree tap-tap-tapping on the door;
It's that tap-tap-tapping you abhor.
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Elizabeth Sheaffer
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Lyn Paul 16 May 2015

This could be a poem of fear yet your description of this cold lonely room has been so well described. Read your biography with interest.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 16 May 2015

Great imagery and onomatopoeia

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Jaishree Nair 16 May 2015

Poverty a terrible state that sometimes forces you to end your life.Beautifully penned.thanks

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Chinedu Dike 16 May 2015

Poverty and deplorable condition of living well depicted in the poem. A nice piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kim Barney 16 May 2015

Loved the title but was disappointed in the poem. I guess it's mostly because I don't like poems about suicide. The poem itself has many good qualities, including perfect rhyming. Congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the Day.

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Terry Craddock 16 May 2015

Incredibly sustained suspense in simple deceptively clever lines, a touch of genius and terribly entertaining, thus I will read this to my daughters with a smile before releasing the lines into their rhythmic rhyming.10+++

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A well constructed POE-m, indeed...Nicely done ~FjR~

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Raveendran . 20 October 2007

Incredible thematization of penury from where hedonism is cherished

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Thad Wilk 20 October 2007

Hi Eliza! Good reminder that people are still trapped in poverty in this country still! (10) ! Thad

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