Can beauty remain beauty without light?
No beauty survives without light in sight
To endure the pangs sharp of age in flight,
For fair with folly dead plunges at night.
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A lovely poem. The light of awareness must shine in order for beauty to be perceived as beautiful and this very lyrical poem shares that truth with honesty and charm. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
A well crafted poem and thought-provoking too...it puts into question the criteria of beauty. Voted 10!
Well.well.well Obinna, I can feel the beauty of this piece.It left me overwhelmed.
beauty is what beauty does...our experiences make the beauty in us shine forth. nice poetry
this is good...i write sonnets as well, and i know how hard it is to its structural limitaTions. good job, although i believe some lines sound a little bit off, Life valued more in thought than gold man eyes, Beats thrones, castles held in esteem that dies. but you did a great job nailing that freakin' rhyme scheme! gogogogogogo!
Really beatiful, meaningful, poetic, mellifluous words.10.
A well crafted poem. Thanks for sharing 10+++