Embers turning deep crimson red
Streaking through the hardened wood
Ashes fallen to the ground
The world silent not a sound
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My Mum and sister would both like this because of the rhymes used. Me I just love the descriptions, atmosphere, feelings..... (Rhymed or Blank) .
very, very pretty...like a painting by vincent...i can see the brush strokes! Best wishes, Theo
a great piece of poetry patricia. beautiful worded, and nicely said.
With vivd images like these, you'll have a hard time hiding anything! lol! FJR
I can smell the woodsmoke from here, Something magical about this and campfires.
'Perhaps my deep feelings for you I would not have to hide' - I agree, pleasure times are best enjoyed when shared.