Thursday, April 12, 2007

Camp Fire Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

Embers turning deep crimson red
Streaking through the hardened wood
Ashes fallen to the ground
The world silent not a sound
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Patricia Gale
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Ben Gieske 05 September 2007

'Perhaps my deep feelings for you I would not have to hide' - I agree, pleasure times are best enjoyed when shared.

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Paul Butters 12 May 2007

My Mum and sister would both like this because of the rhymes used. Me I just love the descriptions, atmosphere, feelings..... (Rhymed or Blank) .

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Theodora Onken 18 April 2007

very, very pretty...like a painting by vincent...i can see the brush strokes! Best wishes, Theo

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Jim Foulk 17 April 2007

a great piece of poetry patricia. beautiful worded, and nicely said.

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With vivd images like these, you'll have a hard time hiding anything! lol! FJR

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Charles M Moore 12 April 2007

I can smell the woodsmoke from here, Something magical about this and campfires.

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