Monday, October 10, 2011

Camouflage Why Not Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stay where you are
Disappear if you must
Stay at the back
Or have yourself locked
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Naida Nepascua Supnet
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Khairul Ahsan 10 August 2013

A wonderful poem. Many things are well said, unsaid. Yet..... A short note from the poem, perhaps?

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Serena Silenced 05 August 2013

There is a lot to be said for poets using their words to get their point across. You have done this very well. :)

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Kevin Patrick 26 October 2011

The title captivated me, and it did not disapoint, your direct with your observations, but that is something I enjoy is the clearity in language and the texture of your meaning. I get a feeling of frusteration being locked in a society that judges differences. Sad but wise

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Faith Bernardo 19 October 2011

Oooooh, I like this poem of yours!

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Unwritten Soul 17 October 2011

hahaha i remember how i was hoping having ability to camouflage when i was a child...And this kinda good teasing hahahahaha i like this poem and it made me smile..Now :) _Unwritten Soul

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Bella Hernandez 16 October 2011

interesting.... never quite read one such as this but very unique... i like it very much keep it up Naida ur Friend Bella

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Ken E Hall 15 October 2011

A great lesson for the quite ones the shy and young with suttle wisdom...regards

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Jim Troy 13 October 2011

It is like a warm glowing friend helping a child to overcome fears and done in great feelings of affection and beauty. Good to see you writing again my friend Jim Troy

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Ency Bearis 12 October 2011

The way around of encouraging verses. Nice logic of such intent.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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