Stay where you are
Disappear if you must
Stay at the back
Or have yourself locked
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There is a lot to be said for poets using their words to get their point across. You have done this very well. :)
The title captivated me, and it did not disapoint, your direct with your observations, but that is something I enjoy is the clearity in language and the texture of your meaning. I get a feeling of frusteration being locked in a society that judges differences. Sad but wise
hahaha i remember how i was hoping having ability to camouflage when i was a child...And this kinda good teasing hahahahaha i like this poem and it made me smile..Now :) _Unwritten Soul
interesting.... never quite read one such as this but very unique... i like it very much keep it up Naida ur Friend Bella
A great lesson for the quite ones the shy and young with suttle wisdom...regards
It is like a warm glowing friend helping a child to overcome fears and done in great feelings of affection and beauty. Good to see you writing again my friend Jim Troy
The way around of encouraging verses. Nice logic of such intent.
A wonderful poem. Many things are well said, unsaid. Yet..... A short note from the poem, perhaps?