Tuesday, December 11, 2018

Camouflage Comments

Rating: 4.1

The camouflagic sadness of a smile—

the corpse of a murdered dream,
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Jankovic Zoran 19 February 2019

Severe feelings. A heart that wanders in the desert and looks in the mirror, and only sees a smile of sorrow. You play with words like singing Fado.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 December 2018

The way of presentation is very nice. The title of the poem is appropriate. Love with sadness and camouflagic sadness of a smile are well painted. Beautiful poem.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 December 2018

The fountain of a desert heart! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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