Friday, March 30, 2018

Camouflage Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every garden has weeds
Every heart bleeds
Smiling moon wears many scars
Sun hides it's hues of laugh
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Jaya Das
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Valsa George 05 April 2018

All of us have flaws. Behind every smiling face, there is pain! But we camouflage ourselves to adapt to the situation and hide our real color and texture! Meaningful write Jaya!

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Mj Lemon 30 March 2018

A poem with a great truth! Our outside often serves as a mask to conceal what can be a great pain beneath. A great poem, Jaya.

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Naila Rais 30 March 2018

I can understand your pain... Deep inside.... I would like you read my poem LET ME RISE and In the mid of the night, depression you are killing me.... Naila 👍👍😃😃

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2018

Every heart bleeds and this provokes thought. Sky is blue and smiling moon gives hope and calmness. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned...10

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