Sunday, July 13, 2008

Camera, Camargue, (Come Here) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wow. Your intelligence amazes
my blank chessboard brain.
Unlike A Scanner Darkly where the poor
man cries in vain.
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Effie Yalena Steyn
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Brian Jani 30 June 2014

ilike this poem, you have a thoughtful use of vocabulary.

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Michelle Evans 27 July 2008

This poem feels...a bit jumpy I think. But then again, I can't really judge. Anyway, I like the ideas.

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Effie Yalena Steyn

Effie Yalena Steyn

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