The sweet scented flowers of pink are now blooming
And telling the land that the springtime is here,
For soft and like velvet their petals are glowing
I've waited a lifetime to see them appear.
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Another rhyming catchy way from your words. Loved the way you apply your knowledge. Great stuff. Great read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
This flows so beautifully that you can actually feel and see the beginnng of spring comming.. You have such a talanted way of painting so much vivid imagry... This totally took me away... Very good...... Bonnie
This is just so lyrical Andrew. It reads like the lyrics of a song - with it's mix of verse and chorus. The subject is a exquisitely beautiful one, and your words indeed to it justice. Thoroughly satisfying poetry. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
What more could one ask for. A pure delight with another pattern to surprise and satisfy the reader fully. The first time my daughter tasted champagne her cheeks turned pink just like the flowers you are describing. Wonderful write!
The structure is magnificent. A perfect poem as far as I can tell. I gave it a 10 and I have taken it as a favorite. Absolutely fantastic Andrew! GW62
This is indeed a beautiful poem, Andrew. Such a vivid expression of natures wonder. a 10++, my friend. Richard
Remarkable poem Andrew! ! The land with their splendor such joy they do give And filling my senses with passion and feeling A sight i shall treasure as long as i live. (BEAUTIFUL) ! ! *10plus! Best wishes! Friend Thad
Your observational poetry is so moving, you write with passion Andrew Love duncan X
One of my favourite flowers Andrew, your poem is so good I can almost smell the fragrance, and I like the repitition at the end of each verse, well done, Lynda xx 10
lovely poem, i have never seen Camelia, but your poem brings it to life in my imagination. very beautifully composed10 Mamta
Shining poems, Andrew... Gentle and attractive as your camellia... This flower decorates the woman especially... And why - that I recollect Prosper Merimee... 10x10.. Sincerely, Tsira