Wednesday, January 14, 2009

Camelia Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sweet scented flowers of pink are now blooming
And telling the land that the springtime is here,
For soft and like velvet their petals are glowing
I've waited a lifetime to see them appear.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Tsira Goge 26 January 2009

Shining poems, Andrew... Gentle and attractive as your camellia... This flower decorates the woman especially... And why - that I recollect Prosper Merimee... 10x10.. Sincerely, Tsira

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Ernestine Northover 26 January 2009

Another rhyming catchy way from your words. Loved the way you apply your knowledge. Great stuff. Great read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Bonnie Collins 22 January 2009

This flows so beautifully that you can actually feel and see the beginnng of spring comming.. You have such a talanted way of painting so much vivid imagry... This totally took me away... Very good...... Bonnie

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Alison Cassidy 22 January 2009

This is just so lyrical Andrew. It reads like the lyrics of a song - with it's mix of verse and chorus. The subject is a exquisitely beautiful one, and your words indeed to it justice. Thoroughly satisfying poetry. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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What more could one ask for. A pure delight with another pattern to surprise and satisfy the reader fully. The first time my daughter tasted champagne her cheeks turned pink just like the flowers you are describing. Wonderful write!

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Greenwolfe 1962 19 January 2009

The structure is magnificent. A perfect poem as far as I can tell. I gave it a 10 and I have taken it as a favorite. Absolutely fantastic Andrew! GW62

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C.R. Clark 17 January 2009

This is indeed a beautiful poem, Andrew. Such a vivid expression of natures wonder. a 10++, my friend. Richard

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Thad Wilk 16 January 2009

Remarkable poem Andrew! ! The land with their splendor such joy they do give And filling my senses with passion and feeling A sight i shall treasure as long as i live. (BEAUTIFUL) ! ! *10plus! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Duncan Wyllie 15 January 2009

Your observational poetry is so moving, you write with passion Andrew Love duncan X

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Lynda Robson 15 January 2009

One of my favourite flowers Andrew, your poem is so good I can almost smell the fragrance, and I like the repitition at the end of each verse, well done, Lynda xx 10

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Mamta Agarwal 15 January 2009

lovely poem, i have never seen Camelia, but your poem brings it to life in my imagination. very beautifully composed10 Mamta

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Fiona Davidson 14 January 2009

Lovely poem for a beautiful flower...thank you

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