Came Closer To Leave Forever Comments

Love it. The poem seems to have come directly from the heart. I could feel the emotion, your grief, your despair and also the hope in the sweetness offered by memories. Sweet, tender and somewhat touching. Overall, a wonderful poem on love and seperation.

The love game well composed as a poem.

The love game well composed as a poem.

He will return, if you can write like this. He may even be a Poet, as you are destined to be +10 Kind Regards Philip

keep expressing urself, young lady!

b'fully separation is portrayed...n the pain caused by it.. soul of the poem is the hope still alive playing somewhere in the heart..very lively.. 10++

Wonderful and encouraging. Keep writing!