Cambre And Arielle (From Waking To Repose) Comments

Fascinating. Don't need a body to love; or despise for that matter. Not quite sure why, but I can see an icy-white/blue right now and hear the voicelike sound of air being rapidly forced through compressed space; that low inveterate whistling noise. That is how the poem makes me feel. I don't know what that means about how i feel about it but i like the picture, the poem and the concept of a senseless feeling.

A pleasant read. I like the storytelling. Last two stanzas are my favorite because they're relatable & clever.

A lovely poem that was a joy to read