Camaraderie Comments

great advocate write..nice rhymes and delivering the message of peace and unity..10

hope it would be a reality one day!

I love the peace not war theme. It is very lovely, it gives a sense of freedom with the 'soar the unlimited sky' and freedom is grand.

I love the peace not war theme. It is very lovely, it gives a sense of freedom with the 'soar the unlimited sky' and freedom is grand.

The message was very clear.........make love not war!

It's always a pleasure to read an upbeat and optimistic poem, Juneil. You express many fine ideals in this poem and your words evoke some superb imagery as well. I am left wondering, however, whether this is a free verse poem or a rhyming poem, like a quatrain, which is the form you apparently used. The problem is compounded by that fact that some lines indeed do rhyme while others do not. Your poem is expressive, which I like quite a bit. If you wish to write in certain poetic forms, however, I would suggest you find a guidebook in a good bookstore and read of their requirements and practice them. I am confident you will master them in a short time and produce some very good poems. Carl.

Wonderfully rousing and electric in it's flow - - - I love it and am sure this will be well received - - - it has style and well thought out material....... more than 10 if I could - - - from Fay.....