Nice poem, except, in line one, the word you want is CAVALRY and not CALVARY.
Also, in line seven, did you mean SLACKERS instead of SLAGGERS. I have never heard of slaggers. Will have to look that word up.
Calvary was spelled correctly you must have looked at it wrong. Slaggers I put that way to rhyme assuming that the readers would understand what was being said as you said, instead of using 'slackers'
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Nice poem, except, in line one, the word you want is CAVALRY and not CALVARY. Also, in line seven, did you mean SLACKERS instead of SLAGGERS. I have never heard of slaggers. Will have to look that word up.
Calvary was spelled correctly you must have looked at it wrong. Slaggers I put that way to rhyme assuming that the readers would understand what was being said as you said, instead of using 'slackers'