Monday, November 25, 2019

Calvary Comments

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"Send in the calvary! "
The battle was surmounting
The enemy attacked us
Our allies never backed us
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Kim Barney 25 November 2019

Nice poem, except, in line one, the word you want is CAVALRY and not CALVARY. Also, in line seven, did you mean SLACKERS instead of SLAGGERS. I have never heard of slaggers. Will have to look that word up.

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Christopher Aaron 08 January 2020

Calvary was spelled correctly you must have looked at it wrong. Slaggers I put that way to rhyme assuming that the readers would understand what was being said as you said, instead of using 'slackers'

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