Tuesday, August 18, 2009

Calm Down My Friend Comments

Rating: 2.9

You are hearing these noises.
From your head there are voices.
You imagine something despicable.
These things do not make you stable.
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Obed dela Cruz
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masked lady 20 December 2009

napakaganda ng tula mo kaibigan! gustong-gusto ko. Napakagaling mong makata. tagahanga mo ako. Deserves 10+++! thanks for sharing.

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Kesav Easwaran 24 October 2009

good poem Obed...you have tremendous insight into lif'e's wisdom ways...thanks...10

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Antonio Liao 01 September 2009

an easy way to hold your 'way'.....just be calm....thank you for your poem....an asset to be wise...a 10 +

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Aron Lelei 29 August 2009

Just let them flowing coz we are calm.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2009

It’s just they’ve done it without giving you a clue. you must be wise enough to counter them...lovely poem

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Jhane Reyes 23 August 2009

wonderful piece! ! ! ! ! ....love it! write more!

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Jhane Reyes 23 August 2009

wonderful piece! ! ! ! ! ....love it! write more!

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Zeinab Sherif 20 August 2009

oh! this poem is so marvellous & lovely 2 read.10+++

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Sandra Martyres 20 August 2009

Thank you for inviting me to read your poems...You have a lot of talent...at such a young age..Good work

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Purple Orchids 19 August 2009

i am happy that you invited to read your poems..i have few of your poems and you are a great poem in making

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Rajaram Ramachandran 18 August 2009

Good advices to a friend, who can better his life by following the same.

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Obed dela Cruz

Obed dela Cruz

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