Calm Comments

Quite an effect this poem has. Finely set.

I love the tone to this wonderful piece Carol...it soothes the mind as you read along these beautifully expressed calming lines....A great poem my friend 10+++ The kind of poem I need right now.... :)

Very nice one...our second date is unknown but when you reach it this world should be clam for your clam...nice thought

that was really calm...after the soul had convinsed the body of it's departure..we without anyoter knowing await that sweet sleep...this poem totally removes the bitterness from death

Very nice.Keep writing