Tuesday, March 27, 2018

Calling Too Late Comments

Rating: 5.0

Old lady mistook him as a ward-boy,
She blundered in calling the retired play-boy,
In white starched Kameez Shalwar,
From naughtiness, never too far,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Loke Kok Yee 29 March 2018

Your heart beat stronger than the young and you must be looking young as well. It is a compliment if she can mistook you for a ward boy. Thank you sir.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 March 2018

A lovely witty write that brings smile.I loved the receptionist's remark, very clever. A naughty playboy never retires when it comes to what words he utters....still the words of the poet will entice anyone..Fantastic poem. Enjoyed every bit of it including the poet's note.10

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Rini Shibu 28 March 2018

Calling was too late naughty retired play boy..haha enjoyed

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Valsa George 28 March 2018

Quite true..... 'this retired play boy..... from naughtiness never too far'....! Enjoyed your self appraisal!

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