Onward and forward, into confession
Looking to answers, for my quiet obsession
Night always ends with one more page written
Without teeth or marks, how was I bitten
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YOU ANSWERED YOUR CALLING, WITH YOUR GIFT TO WRITE, AND LEFT ALL THE OTHER POETS FEELING UP TIGHT. ANOTHER TEN
DC Can u bless me with some good words as well, as I am running short of words to keep praising your poems.............however keep writing, it shall only gimme a chance to improve my vocab......... a 1000000000000000000++++++++++++++++ for this one...hope the zeros are correct.......i wanted to give a zillion points
Very nice rhyme and flow.There are people who see beyond the visible...a ten
I would consider possibly changing the last word in second line to 'obsession'? Otherwise, nicely done. Linda
this is great and a pleasure to read.