Monday, June 1, 2009

Calling Comments

Rating: 5.0

Onward and forward, into confession
Looking to answers, for my quiet obsession
Night always ends with one more page written
Without teeth or marks, how was I bitten
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Meggie Gultiano 28 August 2009

this is great and a pleasure to read.

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Danny H 17 August 2009

Very unique title for a wonderful and delightful poem!

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Louis Rams 02 August 2009

YOU ANSWERED YOUR CALLING, WITH YOUR GIFT TO WRITE, AND LEFT ALL THE OTHER POETS FEELING UP TIGHT. ANOTHER TEN

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Nikunj Sharma 16 July 2009

DC Can u bless me with some good words as well, as I am running short of words to keep praising your poems.............however keep writing, it shall only gimme a chance to improve my vocab......... a 1000000000000000000++++++++++++++++ for this one...hope the zeros are correct.......i wanted to give a zillion points

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Very nice rhyme and flow.There are people who see beyond the visible...a ten

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Linda Ori 08 June 2009

I would consider possibly changing the last word in second line to 'obsession'? Otherwise, nicely done. Linda

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