Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Called To Soon Comments

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this is dedicated to leslies nephew- our prayers are with him

we saw the smile upon your face when
you felt the LORDS tender embrace.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2009

we saw the smile upon your face when you felt the LORDS tender embrace. when he told you it was time for you to depart but that you'd always be in our hearts. ...........................very tochy and emotional poem... it is so nice to read all your poems sir...10 read mine...o, lord....prayer...prayer for friends... humble submission.... beautiful world

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Christine Kerr 26 March 2009

A nice bit of write to have around to help someone grieving over the lost of their child. Very well put 10++++

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So lovely nice flow.. i love the ending its wonderful Krista

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