Call Of The Stranger Comments
The black thick untied hair of the night,
nature in its bed with soundless sleep,
silence enjoying the moonless night,
Depth of sleep in my eyes,
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A very soul stirring and thought provoking piece..beautifully rendered Priyanka 10/10
''turned back and saw some faces, faces of the poor beings, children who starve for food, the hungry people asking me, that why are we impious towards them? '' This poem is very realistic, very sad. These kids have a real need for help...10+++
raised the curtain, and saw there sitting, two small children started their day begging. you hit me so hard with the reality... a nicely progressing poem. you are a poetess par excellence
That stranger is very much within you my dear! Shake hands with him to be friendly. I'm sure he'll prove to be the best frien of yours! ! !
very convincing... your heart is in it... very wonderfully narrated...it sends a gentle touch too... in every needy children, you can see God.. in every helpless cry, it's the cry of God... thanks for sharing this...touching in many ways.. 10+++++ l♥ vel♥ ts, maia
A dream in the darkness and more darkenned realities in the bright day light...you convey your thoughts brilliantly in this narrative write, Priyanka...thanks...10
Great poem.. your thoughts flow very smoothly and create indeed an elegant poem..10 ++++ Kushal
ya its dreams inside and hard stark reality out the window nicepoem cheers
true a bitter reality..you words have given life to the subject...nicely done...read my 'a true blend' and 'a small i and a big me'
A deeply moving poem with many striking and strong lines...You might want to read Songs of Innocence and Experience by William Blake available free online...
It wasn't a dream, a bitter reality, a reminder from within but the comforts of our wretched lives would soon wash the bad conscious away, don't worry! How we hate the nightmares! :)
Thought provoking dream....can't vanish out of the heart(window) ...nice reading...thanks
this dream world is pretty intriguiging notwithstanding all that freud said...
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7/19/2025 7:07:23 AM # 1.0.0
a poem in deep sound and prolific........ great write............