From cloudy calm sky,
As raindrops gently fall
Beyond the hazy horizon,
I can here someone call.
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I can here someone call.......i remind you of the spelling mistake...here should be hear..... Silence is sometime speech and cacophony is the discretion only after a spell of silence which could be one event or a series of incidents coherent or coincidental...or may be contemporary.....well written 10+
Ishita... this is how God calls you... never stop listening.... Fine write my young friend an intelligence far beyond your years 10 plus Regards Alf... PS I love rhythm and rhyme poetry
From cloudy calm sky, As raindrops gently fall Beyond the hazy horizon, I can here someone call. again very romantic poem and start from the above stanza is very heart knocking, soul shaking with pleasure.. hey poet fo loev and romance you are really doing a good job..keep it on and never stop writing..really loving poem this one..liked it much..10++++++++++++
This seems to me, to be a very deep poem about recognizing the voice of silence. I wonder to myself is this the personification of nothing? Does no one realy exist in the abstract world of poetry? An excellent thought provoking poem.10/10.
hey..wow...a simple and delicately beautiful poem. loved it. silent..and soothing. very well done. thank you very much.
phenomenal ishita very good lines great flow...exuberance and cofidence in youth nice rhyme great ten and cheers
Beautiful in a touching way.