Tuesday, August 26, 2008

Call Of Nature Comments

Rating: 4.5

Fog blankets the desolate earth
With motionless, invisible arms
Concealing any imperfections
Of Nature's poised beauty and charm
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Wendy Bureau
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Kathryn Mahan 12 May 2014

Wonderful work Wendy!

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Paul Sebastian 10 May 2014

A superb write. Nature's beautiful way of feeding the thirsting earth! Enjoyed it!

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Leslie Philibert 09 May 2014

Nice job, excellent rhymes in the quatrain

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Paul Reed 09 May 2014

Enjoyed this very much

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Guess Who 09 May 2013

Ver ygood poem keep the good work up.......... GuessWho

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Savita Tyagi 09 May 2013

Lovely poem. Enjoyed it. Like many other nature' simple wonders fog is just beautiful to behold.

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Yasmin Khan 09 May 2013

It celebrates the poise and beauty of Nature that ornaments and balances our earth. Nicely penned piece of writing

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Babatunde Aremu 09 May 2013

Nice poem. The use of imageries is powerful especially the starving sponge. Bravo!

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Jayne Davies 09 May 2013

Great poem! Well done x

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Heather Wilson 21 May 2012

A wonderful poem, a real pleasure to read.you have a lovely way with words.

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Dawn Ferrett 10 May 2012

Beautiful! I really love your style of writing and wish I had half of your talent! I must read more! ! ! ! Dawn xx

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Lucy Lae 09 May 2012

The last stanzas make the poem, it gave it a different and unique sound, well written 9/10

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Bob Gibson 07 April 2009

An incredible poem, i was whisked away in the blankets of your theme

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Ron Flowers 18 November 2008

So beautifully written. Ron

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Adeline Foster 02 November 2008

Very good poem and the double entender was truly lovely. Adeline

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Andrew Blakemore 08 October 2008

Wonderful imagery in this poem Wendy, a real gem. Best wishes, Andrew

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Until the last lines one could rate the poem not more than 9. Then, poet Wendy Bureau, surprised us spreading 'the miracle of an unspoken prayer from crying clouds' in our saturating dirt and root, responding to Nature's call. And then, I put a full 10, gladly.Poetry discloses miracles over and over.Thanks for sharing Wendy Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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Bob Blackwell 29 August 2008

Wendy I read this poem once and then again, your chosen words fit just right, your picture mist is just right as I feel quite damp from those falling tears. Bob a 10

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Kesav Easwaran 28 August 2008

gentle tender soft second stanza lines...beautiful imageries there...then again- crying clouds- the imagery there also very good...good poem, Wendy...lovingly told 10

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Joseph Poewhit 26 August 2008

Them ducks also like the rains

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