Fog blankets the desolate earth
With motionless, invisible arms
Concealing any imperfections
Of Nature's poised beauty and charm
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A superb write. Nature's beautiful way of feeding the thirsting earth! Enjoyed it!
Lovely poem. Enjoyed it. Like many other nature' simple wonders fog is just beautiful to behold.
It celebrates the poise and beauty of Nature that ornaments and balances our earth. Nicely penned piece of writing
Nice poem. The use of imageries is powerful especially the starving sponge. Bravo!
A wonderful poem, a real pleasure to read.you have a lovely way with words.
Beautiful! I really love your style of writing and wish I had half of your talent! I must read more! ! ! ! Dawn xx
The last stanzas make the poem, it gave it a different and unique sound, well written 9/10
An incredible poem, i was whisked away in the blankets of your theme
Very good poem and the double entender was truly lovely. Adeline
Wonderful imagery in this poem Wendy, a real gem. Best wishes, Andrew
Until the last lines one could rate the poem not more than 9. Then, poet Wendy Bureau, surprised us spreading 'the miracle of an unspoken prayer from crying clouds' in our saturating dirt and root, responding to Nature's call. And then, I put a full 10, gladly.Poetry discloses miracles over and over.Thanks for sharing Wendy Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded
Wendy I read this poem once and then again, your chosen words fit just right, your picture mist is just right as I feel quite damp from those falling tears. Bob a 10
gentle tender soft second stanza lines...beautiful imageries there...then again- crying clouds- the imagery there also very good...good poem, Wendy...lovingly told 10
Wonderful work Wendy!