Wednesday, September 9, 2009

Call Of Desire* Comments

Rating: 3.2

this embryonic desire
to surrender myself
at the altar of your passion
to feel the warmth of your breath
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indira babbellapati
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Sonya Florentino 19 September 2009

oooh, this is more than sensual...now i have to read what inspired you!

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Saadat Tahir 19 September 2009

beautiful and very well written is it just Gomorrah or soddom and gomarrah remeber doing the second one decades back superb inspired poetry...indeed well done books add to the flavour and can be so inspiring to give us such masterpieces.. cheers and ten

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 September 2009

greatly penned! loved it! ! 10+

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Anand Madhukar 09 September 2009

An excellent piece, very well penned.

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Seema Aarella 09 September 2009

The inspiration and the poet vie for supremacy.........and i vote the poet! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Beautiful, thanks madam!

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desire can be deadly.... but can be..... satisfying... like this.

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Sadiqullah Khan 09 September 2009

Great, Indira.10............

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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