Call me softly in the darkness
Do not deem to wake my soul
Never think to move my stillness
Nor my sorrow yet console
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You don't need my paltry words for this, it speaks loudly enough for itself.
How beautiful. Such inspiring words. Such passion. Never stop writing.
beautiful words, call me softly in the darkness. Nice. Your poem has a soft touch. thanks for reading mine.
With heart uplifted I finished your last stanza. So lovely!
Beautifully written, Val. You are amazing in how you can set the tone so softly as the words spoken..Another masterpiece!
Absolutely gorgeous write, written with such delicacy...tyvm karen
Valerie, I want to join all others in their praise for this marvelous poem. It is written with great feeling and moves the reader very much. It is like a poem from heaven you grasped from the sky.. Superb write. Excellent poetry
A Masterpiece! A very inspiring and touching poem filled delicate stanza that clearly shows your beauty and talent! Valerie, the Poetry World is so proud of you and fantastic works shared with the rest of the World! 10+++ Beauty and Talent breathe through all your works! Thank you for sharing and for all your valuable comments to other poets works (including mine) God Bless You and keep it up! Romeo-New York City
A gentle & mild poem and its beauty is enhanced by its alternate rhyme-scheme...
Whatever you choose to write it always sound soft and amazing! :) _Unwritten Soul
Is this about wanting a time of grieving? That is how I read it. Utterly beautiful piece! So soothing and perfect flow! X
Call me softly in the darkness, do not wrest me from my sleep. I feel like that sometimes, that feeling to stir only for better times. Lovely poem.
while reading, i remember one of my poems with the line, with the cold wind wake my soul.. i love the smoothness of this poem.. thank you for sharing.
Hibernation in melancholy; I once spent a winter sitting in front of a fireplace contemplating thoughts as these, when spring arrived I felt reborn. Nice mood setting on this one Valerie, brings back memories......