Sunday, September 23, 2012

Call Me Softly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Call me softly in the darkness
Do not deem to wake my soul
Never think to move my stillness
Nor my sorrow yet console
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Valerie Dohren
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G.R. Gaus 07 May 2013

Hibernation in melancholy; I once spent a winter sitting in front of a fireplace contemplating thoughts as these, when spring arrived I felt reborn. Nice mood setting on this one Valerie, brings back memories......

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Owain Glyn 17 December 2012

You don't need my paltry words for this, it speaks loudly enough for itself.

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Tony Karas 12 December 2012

Totally beautiful I'm practically speechless.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 16 October 2012

Beautiful, beautiful.

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Star Crossed Lady 15 October 2012

How beautiful. Such inspiring words. Such passion. Never stop writing.

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Heather Wilkins 12 October 2012

beautiful words, call me softly in the darkness. Nice. Your poem has a soft touch. thanks for reading mine.

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A tender thunder. Well done my frined!

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Constance K Yost 05 October 2012

With heart uplifted I finished your last stanza. So lovely!

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Dee Corpolongo 05 October 2012

Beautifully written, Val. You are amazing in how you can set the tone so softly as the words spoken..Another masterpiece!

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Karen Sinclair 03 October 2012

Absolutely gorgeous write, written with such delicacy...tyvm karen

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Hans Vr 01 October 2012

Valerie, I want to join all others in their praise for this marvelous poem. It is written with great feeling and moves the reader very much. It is like a poem from heaven you grasped from the sky.. Superb write. Excellent poetry

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Anita Sehgal 01 October 2012

soft, musical, full of joy.. lovely

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Romeo Della Valle 30 September 2012

A Masterpiece! A very inspiring and touching poem filled delicate stanza that clearly shows your beauty and talent! Valerie, the Poetry World is so proud of you and fantastic works shared with the rest of the World! 10+++ Beauty and Talent breathe through all your works! Thank you for sharing and for all your valuable comments to other poets works (including mine) God Bless You and keep it up! Romeo-New York City

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Shahzia Batool 30 September 2012

A gentle & mild poem and its beauty is enhanced by its alternate rhyme-scheme...

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 September 2012

Written well and i hereby appreciate

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Unwritten Soul 30 September 2012

Whatever you choose to write it always sound soft and amazing! :) _Unwritten Soul

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Stevie Taite 30 September 2012

Is this about wanting a time of grieving? That is how I read it. Utterly beautiful piece! So soothing and perfect flow! X

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Melody Thaila Kuku 26 September 2012

Call me softly in the darkness, do not wrest me from my sleep. I feel like that sometimes, that feeling to stir only for better times. Lovely poem.

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Robert Green 25 September 2012

You write wonderfully again Val :)

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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 25 September 2012

while reading, i remember one of my poems with the line, with the cold wind wake my soul.. i love the smoothness of this poem.. thank you for sharing.

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