Friday, April 1, 2016

Call Me Simple Comments

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You may call me simple, but I worship God,
This world proof enough He exists,
But when you add stars, although you think me odd,
This truth's not one my heart resists.
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Jaya Das 06 July 2017

Really even I feel this same thought.., .that whatever the creation I do....it's indeed not mine...I am just a medium So should I not shed my ego and move on....created what is asked... Well, this is a beautiful poetry poet Thank you so much..l

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Bri Edwards 23 November 2016

oops! i typed HIs, not His. : ( i see you've suggested What Do You Hear? to another reader. have i read it? let me see! bri :)

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Bri Edwards 26 August 2016

for God, i'm glad He finds HIs bliss in our lives. i only wish all HUMANS could find bliss in their lives! ! ! ! i think their is some twisted logic here! i.e. not logical. : ( [of course i'm talking about logic as i was taught it many years ago. i believe 'blind faith' is what i would call your unthinking beliefs, but, IF IT WORKS FOR YOU, good for YOU! ] bri ;) but the poem has nice rhyming and flow. and, yes, i'll gladly call you simple! ! ! ha ha

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 April 2016

My ego won't go there, humility's gain, I'm praising a Will beyond man's, A God who can simply have thought in His brain, And universe echoes His plans. very nice poem. i like poets and poetesses who believe in God and who are not egotic in their thinking and attitudes. humility i believe is a God-given gift. thank you very much dear poet. tony

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