Thursday, May 7, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! Call Me By My True Name! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 2.6

Please call me by my true name,
Not the ones that with tags came;
For it always reminds me
What I truly want to be…
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Mamta Agarwal
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Bob Blackwell 21 May 2009

Lovely so full of enthusiasm. I agree Lotus could be your real name.

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Kesav Easwaran 18 May 2009

Lotus could be your real name! good write Mamta...unveils a lot of positivity it inhales...10

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Sandra Fowler 14 May 2009

A beautiful, positive write. But there is something very poignant about it as well. I believe you will bloom like the Lotus, Mamta. Your eloquence becomes you. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Catrina Heart 14 May 2009

A meaningful write woven with fine diction and rhymes................10

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a fantastic write..a veru positive thought

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C. P. Sharma 11 May 2009

A question the ever haunts the mind of thinking person. A very well composed poem. The frame makes us forget true name Sometimes it brings good name Many a times it brings the blame Life swings between blame & fame CP

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premji premji 11 May 2009

bharat......... that's her true name.......... call her by her true name............

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Sandra Martyres 07 May 2009

Very nice one Mamta....

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We all require our own free-winged idendities...wheter we are spoken for by law...or have made committments to something or someone...It's called RESPECT and if one has earned it...it should be honoured...always, by all! Don't know if i have interpreted this piece accurately...If not...trust me, Mamtaji...it is ME, not YOU, who is out-of-it! ...It's 6am in New York City...and i have yet to get last nights sleep sleep! Fine Work, as always from you, my good friend! ~ ~ ~ 2009

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Catrina Heart 07 May 2009

Great simile and end rhymes here MA.....meaningful poem.10+++

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rago rago 07 May 2009

fantastic write........... none inhibits my growth, even if plunged in gloom let me like a lotus bloom........ thank u for ur kind sharing.

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