Call Me Above.... Poem by Naila Rais

Call Me Above....

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Oh! let me come out
No more I can bear
I have chronic pain in my heart
And a great deep piece...

Oh! let me forget
B'coz as I use to think
I'm left unconscious
And a statue rare still...

O'Thou call me above
Faraway in the heaven land
I'm left alone
As a bare tree...

O' Thou grant me one wish
Take me in your hand
This world is of no use
And cruelty is deep rooted here....

Thursday, September 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,god,hatred,hopelessness,me against myself,suicide
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 24 November 2018

O'Thou call me above Faraway in the heaven land I'm left alone As a bare tree... in my helplessness please callme and save me. a beautiful prayer. tony

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Nabilah Afzal 20 September 2018

A truly beautiful inspiring poem! ! ! :) A fabulous read well done I thoroughly enjoyed it! Xx

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Naila Rais 20 September 2018

Oh! ! Thanks............................. Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 September 2018

when one has faith in ones own self negativity vanishes so as long as we live be positive niraash na hoe duniya mein hain humsabhee bakee allah zane ram zane hum naheen poetry keep composing the stress depression will go and love and happiness alone shall flow let you feelings like a river flow life is a long way from the estuary and rivers will take any and every ne even you and poet me

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Naila Rais 20 September 2018

Hmmm.... Thanx for your words Naila

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 08 September 2018

what a pain is reflected by this poem...May God give all the happiness and keep more alive in this world....Kabhi kabhi ham sochte hey keh mujhe is dunia ki koi zorurat nehi, aor mujhe is dunia ko sor ke jana hey, , , Lekin khuda kehta hey mere pyare bandee tum pareshan aor mayus mat hona, , , Qk is duniaya ko tumhari zorurat hey...

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Naila Rais 08 September 2018

Kk..... Oh nooo....

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 08 September 2018

I can understand... I can feel the same pain that burn som1...A differ thing is that I become more painful by other people pain....

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Naila Rais 08 September 2018

Yah! It's true but...... Naila

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Hazel Durham 08 September 2018

Beautifully written Naila you write from your deepest emotions, every line is achingly real and the world can be cruel but there is so much to fall in love with in this world, like the beauty of your talent!

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