Saturday, October 27, 2012

Call Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

It's him!
She picks up.
The deep timbre
Of his voice
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Ruby Honeytip
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That is the epitome of love, " She wraps herself in the sound of him instead. "

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Khairul Ahsan 02 May 2017

'A vibration so sweet And so deliciously low That she melts to liquid' - wonderful depiction of excitement over a voice and the imagined consequences.

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Sandy Player 02 January 2013

So very magical, its like we really are there

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Stevie Taite 24 November 2012

How well you captured the excitement! Wow!

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Indranil Bhaduri 10 November 2012

A moment of conversation cherished for long..exciting and intriguing.. Loved it.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 09 November 2012

the feeling of that particular moment is well penned here!

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Lyn Paul 04 November 2012

You can feel the excitement Ruby, great writing

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